Fridge or shower?
If you’re going to talk about the shower, talk about the shower and leave the fridge out of it. This is quite a confusing message. It started off alright – there seems to be a problem with the shower, and the super will come over to fix it. But what does the fridge has to do with it? Why not send it in a separate message?
Also, there seems to be a lot of problems with this apartment. Moving into a new place is stressful enough as it is, and with a dysfunctional shower and a non-existent fridge, everything becomes that much worse. Can you imagine moving in to a new apartment and finding out there are so many problems that require fixing? I hope his tenant wasn’t spooked out by this message.