On point
I believe we can all agree that these terrible pickup lines have to go. We’re not sure if they work on males, but they certainly don’t on ladies. Jack clearly needs some assistance with his opening lines.
All he could muster was, “So fine?” How cliche. What wasn’t trite was the response that the woman he was talking to threw back at him. She penned a fantastic analogy contrasting men’s childishness to grapes and owned him. Love it!